All Comments on 'Jake and Naomi'

After a bit more than half a page of non-stop over blown stereotypes I gave up.

Clearly written by some dude >.>

Stopped reading after "slurping the soup"

I agree with Heisenhug. This is incredibly embarassing crap & I'm a dude. This is offensive borderline misogynist trash. Don't quit your day job.

Two thumbs down! Like 'For Real' who talks like that - oh, I know...

As a femme who greatly appreciates butch/femme dynamic, please write more stories like this. I loved it!

At the crossroads of idiotic stereotypes, ignorance and misogyny, one man decides to attempt lesbian porn...