All Comments on 'Jake and Toby Ch. 08'

I was glad to see the next chapter of Jake and Toby, I missed these characters and their story.

Another wonderful chapter, I love this story and the way you write. I have been looking forward to another chapter for a long time and am so glad to have now read it. Thanks so much and keep them coming.

Nice, now I want details about the wedding, where they choose to live, and if and when the patter of little feet will come along.

Hope next chapter doesn't take that long. Thanks for continuing the story.

Waiting for the next chapter please! It's not finish I'm right ?

I liked the writing style! The story is very well told. Thank you for sharing.

readers would have read my profile page, but some have, most have not. I have been sick for some time. I'm on the mend but still tired and doctors are still trying to help me. I pull out my stories when I feel well, but I will be honest, I sat at work at talked to my coworker the other day and told them I didn't even remember the last 4 months, LOL, probably even longer than that. I just pulled out my chapter 15 of D & L, the last time I worked on it was July 29, 2016, I couldn't even tell you what I even wrote. Can I tell you when any of my stories will be out, all I can tell you is, I WILL TRY. THANK YOU FOR BEING HERE. I do/did enjoy writing, it has just been put on hold. My health is more important. kmillerk1

From the comment here, I realize the author had health problems and was/maybe is dealing with much bigger problems so best of luck to him. None of this matters in the scope of all of that. Having said that, it was very disappointing that the story of Jake & Toby ended abruptly and did not get a proper conclusion. The follow-up prequel of Toby & Jack’s story was a hot mess and a huge decline from this story. And the Ch 9 vignette of Toby in Boston before Doc was a waste. I hated reading about Tony being dominated by the random dude Kevin and especially hated that he gave up his anal virginity to this stranger that he never saw again. Unfortunately this chapter (Ch8) was the last one in which a confident smoking hot Toby was present. All the rest was a version of him that I can’t recognize and don’t want to read about. Sorry but it’s true.

I absolutely loved this story, i have read it multiple times, i hope in the near future you will be able to post more chapters about Jake and Toby ❤️👍