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Have really enjoyed the series. Please can we have some more? I don't think Debbie is right for Rob, she has too many hang ups to make him happy. He enjoys intimacy, so he should find a guy to date until the right woman comes along or not. Really good. Thanks.

Awesome, please continue.

I enjoyed the series very much but I think Rob's discovery about himself should end here. I like the idea of the whole thing with Rob starting and ending with Guy. Maybe you could continue this story in Guy's point of view narrating his own discovery and inevitably leading to Rob finally getting his turn?

These are by far the best stories I've been reading on this site. I can't imagine not finding out how their lives play out. ROB has been doing everything right on his path to self discovery and JAKE is really coming around. I agree that DEBBIE could go and be replaced by somone more open minded in the bedroom. Please don't end it here. There are so many interesting characters and story lines that it would be a shame to end it here. I really enjoy the humor and I think there is just enough erotisism to enjoy very much. Everything you've been doing has been great! Don't change a thing. I understand the need for feedback, but please carry on the way you have been, because your stories ratings speak for themselves. You are 5 stars in my book and I hope to read much more in the future.... Keep up the great work and THANK YOU! ***** Furlong_fan1

He's not claiming to be gay because he's not gay lol so what if he may enjoy the company of a woman every now and then. Just because DEBBIE is a not a match doesn't mean there is no interest period. It doesn't have be black and white. I'm happy with the grey shade of ROB.

I will stick to reading and you write haha

Of course you should continue PLEASE!!!!

May I have some more?

Hi Rob, I wrote to you before. I really enjoyed the development of characters. I really think you should continue with Rob's story. We like him. He has changed a LOT during the series. He's gone from non-gay to having secret thoughts of nuzzling over night with men. It may be interesting to see him fall for a guy (and being surprised, shocked, excited and maybe conflicted about it). I'd thought Guy'd be a good choice, but after his behavior in this chapter, I'd gather Bradley'd be a better fit. I don't particularly like the line of thought of "kissing" is for "fags" and "full-on homosexual sex, cravings & fantasies" aren't. That's why I think it would be good for him to fall in love with a guy and realize that it could also feel and be as natural to want a guy as it would be to love him.

On another note, it wouldn't hurt to include a picture of Rob. The size do his genitals play such an important role here and it's kind of hard to imagine how his genitals would cause such different reactions. I wanna know how he looks like.

I don't think your stories lack erotism. You could add more if you want to, but not at the expense of the comical portion of your writing.

I do hope these comments find you well. Thank you for writing and keep it up!

Loved it, especially the farting bits! Great when guys fart together during sex!