All Comments on 'Jake's Education'

this whole story line reads like a variation on his fifteen chapter series "The Jake Chronicles"...

I started reading, and enjoying your story until I came to the snide remark about Senator Kerry. I had to stop, hatred in porn, as elsewhere, requires fighting it. I fight it by choosing to down-grade your story, and not read anything else you have written.

Narrow minded blue bloods should never read porn, go get your self a gay playmate and move to Borneo.

A Kerry fan here, you probably drive a BMW and act all pompous, the writer encompassed the decorum of the area and the "characters" included.

Get a life somewhere else.

Please never, ever read anything here again as a favor those of us that enjoy some quality with variety.

Disrespectfully,

3XLT Educated Redneck Biker

comment on Senator Kerry was un called for keep politics out of this this is a site for fun not politics if you want politics go somewhere else

by the way

It's a throwaway line in an otherwise good story...

I didn't think people would get up in a huff over something as trivial as poking fun at a politician...

On the Internet of all places.

It's a good scenario, but starting with them already having sex makes it feel rushed, and removes sexual tension from the later flashback, since we know they'll definitely hook up soon. A little build up and anticipation before the sex is a good thing, it makes the payoff all the more erotic when it happens.

I would suggest all you liberals stay off this site. Erotica is here for erotic pleasure, not for political sarcasm. I totally agree with the mature woman's comments. It made the story.

John Kerry Heinz is a public figure. His private sexual proclivities are widely gossiped about it DC, and would be written about in loving wives section on this site, if you know what I mean. Speaking of the Senate, Al Franken is praying that Alec Baldwin runs and wins, so he will no longer be the biggest ass hat in the Senate.

I think/hope that that will be clear when Chapter 2 goes live.

Thanks for sharing.