All Comments on 'Jalapeno Sting'

Not just an over-the-top hot story, but an unsual high standard of literary articulation for this site. What a refreshing relief not to have one's attention to the story blown by distracting gaffes of grammar, orthography and clumsy syntax. My compliments to the author, and would eagerly read anything else he/she has written. Kudos to the max! --Richard Laird Cole, rlairdcole@gmail.com

A solid start. I'm interested in learning more about your characters and how they end up complementing each other. A few minor editing gaffes but we all have those no matter how many times we comb our work for them. Looking forward to more.

I hope there is more for these two. I love all your stories and glad to see you back

Delicious little short.