All Comments on 'Jamaican Awakenin''

Huh?

quite short

The first installment of a multi-part story ...

First part? Quit while you're ahead. You can't write!

It's an interesting and unique start, I would be like to see where you go in terms of group dynamics and all around character development. Look forward to the next piece, however I hope it has a bit more length and introspective to it.

Fucking love it, the shame, the humiliation.

I also love the white guy jerking in the bathroom, terrified and turned on. Been there lol