All Comments on 'Jamaican Holiday Ch. 16'

geting rough. BTW he could cut the clit ring and remove the other rings himself, body jewelry is not case hardened steel, a pair of good diagnonal nippers could cut it off. Plus they could go to a piercing parlor to have them removed, piercing shops won't gossip about that stuff.

He is lucky they didn't get her tattooed up with tramp stamps and other doozies. If I were B, I would be looking for serious revenge on Robert and his family, they would face some serious action for what they did. By letting Jaye go with him B was entrusting her to Robert, and he broke that trust and there can be no excuse for that. I am looking forward to reading more, but I suspect what will happen is Robert will claim what happened in vegas stays in vegas, Jaye will say it was all her fault (or blame B for not being there!), and all will be hunky dory, which personally, if I was into this kind of thing, I would never accept. Robert and his family and friends would pay a price, one they probably would think in their arrogance would never happen.

are exaggerated, because while pee play is generally relatively safe, the kind of sex that happens in this story is a recipe for disaster, Robert may be clean, but what about the others? And then sucking guys off in the restroom? And pee can get someone sick, though it generally is sterile, it can cause issues as well from someone you don't know....if this happened in real life, and Jaye didn't end up with some sort of STD's, I would be surprised as hell. Among other things, all that sex would have her with micro tears and abrasions, which would leave her more prone to infections.

I don't see the problem here. The wife got what she wanted to be used and abused and tortured and she probably liked her body being so damaged. The husband also got what he wanted he loves the idea of his wife being used and abused tortured it's what he gets off on and it's what she gets off on. It's okay though they love each other which is all that matters and of course this really happened and is happening the writer has told us this many times over. The other comments are correct a pair of rusty old pliers and a hard tug and those bits of metal will come out of the wife's skin easily.

This story started out good, But Jesus Christ did you lose the magic quickly. Now you are just forcing it and every chapter is getting worse and worse. You lost me, Goodluck.

Very interesting, intriguing, and thought pervoking. It seems to be very realistic, for the most part anyway (as stated by the author in beginning of the series). Really got into it. Assuming it is real and actually happened. Just had to comment on certain aspects of it. Making this three parts of a lengthly comment. Here my take on it, for what its worth. Make a comment on one of the earlier segments.

Given that in today's varied lifestyles of swinging, sharing, voyuerism (watching), cuckolding, and BDSM, which can all be done safely or with relatively low risk. I have serious issues with parts of this story and/or this couple's relationship and their actions and the long term affects it may have. I think their behavior was very foolish.

1. Not taking into account of the risky long term effects or impact to both their future health, with the unsafe sex practices Jaye performed on, for, and because of Robert, his sons, his nephew, and his brother, while on her trip to Vegas. The entire group, especially Robert (or Richard-whatever his name is) was responsible for Jaye's safety and well being while in Vegas. They, all of them, put her in very serious, life threatening danger, by giving her oxy.. (any drugs for that matter) and then shots of alcohol (maybe more than two) and putting her on a plane. High altitude has a significant or intensifies the effect of the alcohol. She lucky to have lived through it.

2. There is the issue of the daughters viewing the DVD of their "Jamaican Holiday". How can the daughters (both) have respect for their mother after watching her being nothing more than brothel whore or acting the complete slut on a public beach in front on lookers. And absolutely no or even less respect for their father (who's supposed to be their and their mother's protector), who sat there letting it happen and jacking off. At some point if the future, if and when they (the daughters) have their own children. Will they be able to forget, forgive, and want to bring the grandchildren around to their grandparents. DO NOT THINK SO! I realize that everyone who reads this series will have a different opinion of the events that took place and the participants involved. I feel that Robert is nothing but a user and a SCUM-BAG. He has no respect or regard for Jaye and her well being. He only uses her for his own selfish worpped and his familys pleasure. If he cared, he would not have done or allowed to have happened the things that Jaye was subjected to.

I have been a stud for cuckold and bi couples for years and have never seen something run so wild as this. I know, to each their own and all that, but the cuckold, the writer, had a good reason to be pissed. Just saying. I take it that all the fucking was done with rubbers.

Good! that is the right way to treat a white slave whore. They should all be treated as animals without any feelings. Gangbang, deep humiliation and as many pervertions as possible. As a white tranny slave maid and whore to a black superior woman I hate these animals from the bottom of my hart. They should only be kept as slaves.SLAVE ADJOA

I want this for my wife