All Comments on 'James and Carl after Vegas Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

There seemed to be way more sex and not so much storyline.

sj_53sj_53about 8 years agoAuthor
Storyline

The previous comment suggested that this chapter lacked storyline. It is a short transition chapter. James and Carl are settling in to the day to day life as a couple. The girls announced their engagement planting a seed in the minds of the men. There is more story to come. See Pt. 3 in the coming weeks.

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