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All Comments on 'Jamie - The Journey Begins Ch. 06'

by Hutchison12

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JasonClearwaterJasonClearwateralmost 6 years ago
Nice writing

Lots of emotion in this one. This is really fleshing out into a well-rounded story. Nice work. :-)

J.

Hutchison12Hutchison12almost 6 years agoAuthor

Thanks JasonClearwater, appreciate your feedback lots

LASFSEALASFSEAabout 3 years ago
Deep breath

This chapter was intense from super fun to heartache. The characters are so enjoyable and rich. The emotional elements are so real and authentic. I am amazed by the writing. Awesome.

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Enjoy romantic, but not soppy stories, where love finally wins over the mind, because the heart is 10yards down the road waiting with “that look,” "You love, who you love, don't fight it, go with it"