by fiftyshadesofwade
The story is like foreplay...getting you ready for the climax
I'm really enjoying this story- it has good rhythm. It doesn't feel rushed and I like how you're developing the characters. I'm looking forward to more. :)
Two brief tastes of foreplay and, like Jamie, we're left hanging in agitated suspense. Will Alex prove to be the lover that Jamie anticipates. Or is the dominant, confident Alex not all that she would have us believe? Hopefully FSoW will provide the answers. Soon!
if you are going to write a series of stories you should at least finish it and not leave us hanging