All Comments on 'Jamie's Story'

If you choose to continue, it'll be interesting to read how Jamie / Jill and friends arrange their lives and relationships to accept the free-spirited experimenters inside them. Very cool story.

Great story line! Just the right mix of sexy and real, great work!!

Really well thought out, written, and presented.

Butt I'm not buying it. Whats Toms story bi curious I guess. Jill goes out with Anna and watches her fuck gym boy, not likely. That's enough of that.

Now for cross dressing, I think to pull it off a guy would really have to learn to speakwomaneze. I think I would know if a guy was already standing on third base if I was trying to score, just being pretty is not enough. I've never experienced something like this, as far as I know.

Fun enough story withsome good characters, did you ever go to that club, specificly the outdoor patio before, I'm familiar with it from one of your other stories, I thought I was reading one over. Lots of other writers use the same phrase in their other stories stories, its kind of fun to find them. Keep on keeping on.

This is an excellent example of the Lit part of literotica. I was engrossed by the story, far more than the erotic parts. Please do continue with the story and these characters.

I loved the first half of the story and was looking forward to the outcome between Tom & Jill and even the 4 of them...but then you had an extra unneeded dimension - the gym guys and another Rebecca. It became too complex and unbelievable...

This was a great story. I was totally involved in it, this is a great romantic novel. As a CD it really it home. It brought out some strong emotions. I hope there is more to come. Thanks.

I loved it made me hot storie is well written I hope you continue

Very well developed. I definitely want to see what happens next.

I want to hear when you fuck Tom for the first time.

Interesting story but it needs to be continued. Complicate the heck out of it and let it finds its own course. But great so far. Cheers!

Waiting for the next chapter