All Comments on 'Jane Gets Back in the Game'

You do a really nice job building up the background and characters. This is an actual story showing real writer's craft, and something I'm learning from. The little details really make it believable and enjoyable. The erotica is a pleasure to read although I had to do some research on female ejaculation to see if that was possible as described - I've never actually seen that but it does apparently happen. Keep up the great work!

Just the right amount of background storytelling and character introduction balanced with the sexy details. Very well written and deeply satisfying!