All Comments on 'Jane, Living and Loving Ch. 01'
by shadow89andmore
- 6 Comments
Anonymousover 15 years agoabsolutely stunning. A beautifully written story that is truely a page turner! Thank you and please please continue
Charlotte35fover 15 years agoI am thoroughly enjoying this story and am awaiting subsequent parts
jim2268over 14 years agofantastic hot story Jane living and loving ch1
great writing could there e more to come.
jim2268over 14 years agofantastic hot story Jane living and loving ch1
great writing could there e more to come.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI was liking the story just fine until you decided to just leave it there. I can only guess that is where your imagination ran out. What happened the next day or the next days after that? I would really like to know how the rest of the story played out. There is a lot of story left here that cries to be told. What you wrote was hot but I FEEL YOU DIDN,T FINISH. Please finish this !!! What were her feelings the next time she was with either or both of them? Marietta seemed hot for her and vise versa too I think or was at least curious. That was like skydiving then halfway down realizing you forgot the parachute. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, lol
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThis is a well written, beautiful, coming of age story. I enjoyed every minute of it. I am also definitely interested in reading the next chapter.
