All Comments on 'Jane the Jungle Queen Ch. 01'

This is just terrible. 1*

You need to find yourself a good editor who can fix all of the mistakes you made in your story

While it is too early to guess where exactly you are heading with this Story, the scenario looks interesting. Yes, the text could use some proofreading, occasionally there is a word missing and such, but it is not full of errors like the other commenters implied. Please continue

Good premise. It needs an editor that speaks better English to fix the mistakes. Other than that, I think it could become a good story.