All Comments on 'Janelle's Gift'

Finish The Damn Story! Janelle was obviously lying to ONE of them! Was she REALLY trying to trap her husband like she told Morgan, or was she actually giving her husband a gift?

@sbrooks, the text made it clear Janelle was lying to Morgan. It said she was, during the parts of the story where they interacted.

Excellent story!!! I loved how the husband kept the wife involved throughout the entire thing....without Morgan knowing she was being used.

Great story! Perhaps I might suggest an editor review it next time. You had a number of typos that would be easily corrected. But it wasn't too detracting, so 5 stars.

The clear characterization made it very enjoyable to read.

Love it!!!!! Like your style of writing, great story!!!!

but it definitely was hot.

Ah, to be given a 23 year old ....and one motivated to be kinky ...

Wow, I loved the story, everything about it made it sound so believable from all the minor small points to the main events, I look forward to seeing how the new mentor could help her. I love the way you write your stories xx

I will definitely look at your other stories. Glad I found you/this one. It was tight: it had a plot, had characters that were multidimensional and seen from different perspectives, had vibrant sex, and there were no loose ends at the finish. Quite enjoyable.

Great stuff, as always. Love your creative mind.

You have a delightfully naughty mind. I will be reading more. :)

Wonderful ;-)

Janelle was a manipulator. Manipulated Morgan, on the basis of false friendship, into giving a gift to Janelle's husband under false set-up that Morgan was seducing him to cheat. Manipulated Derrick by getting him nearly to ejaculation, then backing off and threatening no oral until he agreed to accept her gift.

I was thinking that if this reflects Soma99's personality, maybe she's not the kind of woman to be attached to. But further reflected that Janelle's manipulation was to give those manipulated something they really wanted!

Well, Hell.

I have to hand it to the devious (read: clever) mind of Soma99 to devise a convoluted plot like this, and then to her literary and storytelling skill to carry it out.

Were a few instances of gender swaps, such as "he" instead of "her" or vice versa.

Paul in Oklahoma

An nice idea how to get the girl into the situation without having a clue.

And a nice gift from wife to husband!

Next chapter?

As of April 2019 I am not working on continuing this story but may revisit the Morgan character in some way in the future. You can always email me or reach me on the Bulletin Board! Thanks for reading! ---Soma

Only two ways a LW Valentine gift story could go. At least she didn't make him a cuck.