All Comments on 'Jane's Son'

Without taking that into consideration, this is a "horribly written story".

Horrible

How stupid can you get?

Throw away your computer, tablet, pen, pencil or whatever and stick to your masturbating!

Stopped reading after first paragraph, and after reading the other comments, glad I did.

Maybe this was your first try a submitting a story. If so, it should be your last.

you got the colors mixed up on the panties, you started out with him using white panties to jerk off with then all of a sudden they became yellow, there was no incest because he did not have sex with his mom, as for feeding his mom a sandwich covered in cum, I think she would have known what cum taste like, if sandwich was covered in as much cum like you said, the sandwich would have been salty as hell and not fit to eat, she would have spit it out.Hard to believe she would eat it.I gave your story 2 stars. By the way, you are one sick bastard to cum in someone's sandwich.

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Don't ever write another story. EVER!!!! You give morons a bad name.

loved the story and want to read a second part,fuck the haters!

Just take your time and write carefully

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Take your time and we will all enjoy the stories.

a fuckin bum wants mommy's pussy. is mum a whore or not?

When did you get the yellow pair of thong? Because you from grabbing the used black ones and the clean white ones to cumming I the yellow and putting the yellow ones back up.

I like the thought of watching your mom unknowingly eating your semen in her sandwich. I'd suggest using that theme to bring her closer to you and your goal of bedding her. Cum in more of her food as an aphrodisiac to get her to desperately desire your cock.

Take your time think before you put it on paper, oh ya get yourself a proof reader. You have a good idea dont stop, build on it........... good luck