All Comments on 'Janie in the Library Ch. 02'

Your story was mentioned on the New Story Thread on Literotica’s Bulletin Board - Author’s Hangout forum ~ Thanks for the read ~ Red

Very good language. The authour sets the scenes and the character so well.

A very nice job of setting the main character's emotions and her final admission of what she feels and wants.

Well done.

My favorite author on Literotica...you craft the characters and the tension before you give the glorious release. Wonderful descriptive language and sensual details. I loved it!!

loved the first installment, thought it was really hot and i wasn't dissapointed when i started reading the continuation. Really love the way you describe everything and i liked the emotional element as well. hope to read more from you

alicexxx

this was a great story and really got me going. Thanx for making me come sooooo much. Love the good work I hope very much that you write another part to this story.

Awesome story. Loved reading every line of it. Looking forward to enjoy more of your works. Keep up the good work