All Comments on 'Jan's Wedding Night'

Great start, looking forward to the follow ups. Well worth reading again.

Your descriptions were fantastic, a lot of writers never paint a mental picture the way that you did. Great job, can't wait for future episodes.

Enjoyed your story, hope you tell more tales about your experiences. I especially love her big clit, fantasy of my own...lol

in the Erotic Couplings section

virgins. And you both refrained from sex for three years before marriage while dating and only groping a bit. Then suddenly on the wedding night she is a sex cat. You my friend have had your chain pulled and hard. My guess is she was very active the entire dating period and didnt really need you. And she could hold you in suspense until marriage to guarantee the marriage. Welcome aboard sucker!

A surprize spousal story of some arousal and long overdue lust. I liked it's well written non-complexity. Thanks writer!

Lame story. Did you get to hold hands? Did you exchange notes saying "Do you like me: Yes or No?

Should have been in erotic...no, narcotic couplings...lulls you to sleep.

A nice precision of details, that most writers never give us. I love big clited and big labia girls and so to me your story is a turn on!

5*****