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All Comments on 'Jarhead on the Loose Ch. 01: Going Joint'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Accuracy

As a former jarhead, I think you should verify the spelling of the various surrounding bases. The mis- identification harms the credibility of your main character.

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