All Comments on 'Jasmin: Guilt Diary Ch. 01'

if you'd used italics or something for to show what is written to differentiate from the rest. A very intersting yarn all the same. Thanks for writting.

scored it a 50 because i don't want to knock it down if i'm not going to read. i didn't start reading this story until you posted chapt 2, your fourth segment.but after reading the first segment and two pages of this segment i gave up.i'm sure many people will enjoy this story but it contains what i call too much 'fluff' for my patience.too much written that offers nothing to the story,just takes up space. for instance in this segment the detailed description of the garage setup. good luck with your story. don

Where is this slut? I would just love to know her. You guys are being too critical. Sensational hot story

why say something in 50 words when 10 words is more than enough.

I saw the "H" so thought would check out. After read and read and read for page after page I came to conclusion either paid by the word or just like to fill up the page.