All Comments on 'Jasmine Ch. 01'

Really got into that, looking forward the chapter 2 :)

Thank you for this story - I look forward to seeing where it will go next. Very well done - five stars.

It was really really lovely story ......so sexy and exciting ....5 stars

My next thought was as I read "she trusted the men", how gullible can one get! They will not even let her hear what they plan. I think these two devious, conniving men are going to plan something very nasty for her. They go off leaving her restrained and have a beer, how about just a little bit of care for her.

they both care for her, so she trusts them. the whole story is about making her feel good and pushing her boundries when she is too shy to bring it about herself.

They may plan some nasty things, but i havnt decided yet. overall it wont be nasty!

That was so hot. Please continue