All Comments on 'Jasmine Fantasies: Becoming a Bimbo'

loved it.

You did another great story look forward to others

so much lust and just enough time I guess I will just have to lick it clean.

It is yet another great story from you, BUT I did see some glaring misspellings in a few places. They do take away from things a bit.

I love your mind and words, and the pics were a great addition. I would love to be Jasmine. I'm glad I was home early before hubby and my adult kids to really enjoy this story. Thanks for writing!

Super hot fantasy story. Loved it. I just wish I was Jasmine.

5 stars, another awesome fantasy! I love your writing, always a well thought out story line.

The volume of sex alone rates 5 stars. But I do love how much of a complete sub she is.

Definitely a cock raiser! Five stars for sure! May I join the club? Love to have these women and teens! Want to kiss, lick, and suck all their feet and toes - and enjoy them other ways too!

What a truly great story as I always expect and receive from you keep this great work

amazing story so awesome so hot wish I was in this club

Just want to say I love the story and hope to hear more about this new story line looks like you have done it again thanks and hope more is coming soon

I really enjoyed your story! I hope that you will grace us with future stories about the continued pairing of mother & daughter.

Wish I was that teacher.

Always the best sex scenes.

they were terrible

As always a wonderful story. I only wish i could find students and teachers like this at the school where i teach

You never disappoint. The pictures are always a nice touch. This story felt like a culmination of your other stories, teacher being dominated by female student, mind control, shemale, incest and black cock. Except for incest with son I think you used everything and yet it didn't feel like too much, another wonderful read.

Once again you nailed it. Excellent story. Turned on the entire story. The taboo is so enticing to read and the way you lead up to it is great. So many potential spin off stories too... I just love your writing

I really enjoyed the story. Kudos! 5 stars from me.

Sorry I got so exuberant i didn't check my spelling before i posted my comment, but I did really enjoy it. Thanks,

Axelotto

Jasmine,

You outdid yourself on this one. The seven pages flew by. This will be a Halloween favorite.

BarlowN

You continue to amaze with your sexy story-telling.

Just wow!

Thanks Jasmine for all your work here, I'm sure the illustrations must be difficult to organise but they make the story so much more special. As always I loved the stockings on all your girls!

A lot of work went into this story - both the fantastic writing and creating the wonderful illustrations - and it paid off tremendously. Thank you for continuing to add these terrific stories!

Jasmine:

Perhaps it was the "personal fantasy" aspect that made this a mega hit in my brain. but I admit the illustrations certainly helped. I hope you have already several more installments ready to go. The ending, alluding as it did, to the Mother Daughter Orgy , the Cheerlearder Raw-Raw (great pun!!) party (Like oysters, pussy should be eaten naked and raw!!) and the Marcus Gang (bang?) all cry out for a story each, at least! Of your 3 Halloween stories, all of which are, to put it mildly, intriuging, I enjoyed this one BEST! I could not believe it was 7 pages, even with the illustrations. It flew by and is on my "Favorites of Favorites" list already! Thanks so much!

Frankly, appreciate the effort, especially with lots of pictures and sexy scenes. Had lots of fun reading + viewing.

Still, the appeal of overall plot lines and relationship dynamics had already been stronger, in my view, in some of your other stories. You already proved You can build convincing plot lines that are at least as entertaining – but without using a mind control short cut for plausibility and an overdone incest theme. Concede this is mainly my personal preference, not a criticism about skill nor execution.

Looking forward to Your next stories

Loved it so much I came twice. ...Is there going to be another chapter to this series. Hope so thanks for the good night

Wow I enjoyed this story so much! As a daddy I would love to read more on how my wife and daughter find out that I am watching them and enjoying how well they are sucking on their pussy!

Many cumming to you! Thanks for the story!

Wow, absolutely fabulous!

The spell, the activity, the rush, the time constraints - OMG! What an imagination!

It is quite obvious, this is a situation that can literally go on for all time!

What a great story and with pics to top it off. I love mind control especially when it's a pretty girl in control. The only other thing I would have liked to see was her getting impregnated by that gorgeous black cock.

I fucking love you, your legs and writing!

My new husband and his two sons have turned me into a cum dump fuck slut. no spell or anything just made me understand what a whore i am. I have been gang fucked I suck pussy and ass and any cock they want me too. I love this story thank you so much.

Absolutely awful

So hot keep them cuming

284. I realy, realy liked this story. Hope you won an award. I see that there maybe some others in the schedule. Hope Jasmine gets lots of pussy to snack on.