All Comments on 'Jasmine Takes Charge Ch. 02'

Sadly, it ended just as it had started to become interesting. You have a fine theme her and you write well, but these bite-size pieces can be frustrating!

Please carry on with this but make your chapters longer. Four stars - it couls so easily have been five.

No value at all. Poorly laid out, sort of a story, even more poorly written. I tried.