All Comments on 'Jason Does Mother and Daughter'

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mBrowmBrowalmost 17 years ago
Hot and Enjoyable

Nice writing! Very Sexy gals there, too. I thought that the latter part of the story should have been extended, fleshed out more, though.

Write some more for us!

thuliumthuliumalmost 17 years ago
Fairy tale.......

Sorry, but it read like a fairy tale in size 36 font...............

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
LOST

I'm lost i don't know huz telling the story

it's a great story just not told properly

and i fink da ending wasn't good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Slight Problem

According to the author, Angelina was tired of waiting and sat on Jason's lap. In moments, Jason was ready to place the virgin in a nude mode. ". . .her tightest, shortest mini skirt and tightest sweater. . ." The author wrote and said he unbuttoned. . ." doesn't seem right. Not a big deal but these are points that distract from a nice story. Boy, I couldn't wait to read how he had the little daughter climbing the bedroom walls and instead I, like the rest of you, were left with a hurry up set of a few sentences. Reading them I discovered he messed with her, fucked her, and set up what and when to fuck mom and dot, during college. SAY WHAT? Because of these items I only gave a 3 to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
What?

So Jason didn't end up with either and some other guy got the mom and then the mom later on? What kinda fucked up shit is that? Oh and Jason putting his foot down and restricted sex to weekends only. Really? Way to drop the ball on the ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Everyone lived happily ever after. The mother found herself another cub, the daughter and the sex toy went separate ways.

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