All Comments on 'Jason's First Night'

The story was beautifully written, from the get go it captured the reader's attention especially with the focus on exploring the interior emotions of the main character...like the character, the reader was kept fully informed of every change in emotion he felt and was receiving. The movement of the action was smoothly done and the descriptive narrative simple, refined and as a result realistic...especially like the aspect of frescoes..don;t know why!

I really enjoyed this story. I like it when characters interact like real people, and I love the historical angle. Nice writing and very sexy. Thanks for sharing!

Truly an amazing piece of work... awsome first, can't wait to see more... will check back often.

I was completely hooked from the first paragraph! As someone else said, all the emotional changes the slave went through were very well portrayed! This was an astounding piece of work. Please tell me there will be more of this slave and his Master!!

Well done!

I like the first person perspective, looks like you have some experience in this area:-) Hmmmm?

Don't keep us waiting, share more of your wonderful talent.

i fucking loved it you must write more!

Your characters are very believable, the perspective is well done and even the roman background is recherched superbly. Great Work!

Great story, well written, hot as hell. Hope you keep writing more stories.