All Comments on 'Jason's problem Ch. 01'

Great start to a common theme. Keep stroking!

the 3some

Nice job. So realistic. I guess you'll do the next chapter after you finish your sophomore year in high school?

More please.

This is so hot, can go many different directions would love more

Could have been better without the Doc. Doc seem like she was cock blocking or pussy blocking.

Everyone should know and keep in mind that using corticosteroids if one has a fungal infection, let alone using steroids to "treat" a fungal infection, is akin to trying to put out a fire by throwing gasoline on it. Steroids suppress the immune system allowing the fungus to gain an advantage over the body's defenses.

MORE...PLEASE!!!!

Keep it CUMMING,can't wait for the threesome either!!!!

Fuck Mom and the good Dr. to make the series interesting.

Too much of the same.

I am disappointed.

The nonsense started here -

.........so she immediately called her personal doctor where she found Jason had an unusual type of penile fungal infection........

and it went downhill from there.

Still, it's a start so hopefully you'll improve as you grow up.

The plot is ridiculous but it doesn't matter because the story is hot, very hot. You could have broken his wrists because I don't see why he can't treat himself.

You should also dwell into the doctor's story. It's obvious she is trying to corrupt the mother-son pair and it would be great to know why.

I hope you will write more about Jason's problem shortly, very good story.

Okay, the plot is preposterous (never heard of a medical specialist who made house calls before!), but I'm enjoying this story and already looking forward to the sequel. Dr. Wood is a curious character. What's her motivation in all this? She hasn't even been described in terms of her age or appearance. Love that she has her own key now and can surprise the other two at any time. It might be nice if she observed them in a voyeuristic ways some time, without revealing her presence.

Also, meant to say that I love that Dr. Wood is clearly in charge and that the mom is such a submissive. This feature should be exploited to the full. Dr. Wood and Jason should work together to ensure that Kelly is made to do things that she would never have imagined.

Sorry, it just does. Russian doesn't translate directly into English. Grammar and syntax are very different. Nice story, though!

This is a very hot story and has progressed where a very shy Mom has now become sexually aroused at her son's huge cock and really likes to be cummed on plus stroking his cock and is getting more aroused sexually with time. Maybe, now she will start doing Jason naked and having him cum all over her body ? She will get so aroused she may when he is healed will want to suck him off and screw him etc. Please keep going as this is hot, thank you.

Are we gonna see the doctor joining in atleast so everybody can be naked. Maybe he can get to fuck both women. Nice story. Keep them coming.

I love stories that include mom’s giving their sons handjobs that eventually end with oral sex but this story is so implausible that it spoiled the story for me

Obvious that the mother is naive and a bit retarded to have actually agreed to the manipulating doctor .

But the way you have slowly built the escalation of the sexual attraction between mother and son is just wow !!

Keep up the good stuff and do visit my stories if you want a kick !

Love and hugs.

Doctor Wood is a quack!!

I found the farcical elements of this story to be fascinating. High praise!

Having the doctor take the responsibility is a great idea, but the facials 'came' too early in the story. A little more variety would have heightened the eroticism.

Why is this Dr. Wood, still useing mommy, when she talks to 18yo. Jason??.And when does a DOCTOR make house calls??, only on Fantasy Island. Hope next part is better.

Could use a little more proof reading

in the first place, they don't want the red spots to spread. so what is keeping it from spreading as the precum runs down the head of his cock and into his mom's mouth when he shoots his load on her face and mouth and she is swallowing his cum after some of his cum has dripped off the head of his cock that is infected with the red spots, she may, in fact, be getting an infection from it in her mouth and anywhere else the cum goes.that would be so dumb on their part. the doctor is clearly a quack. hard to believe this could happen. 1 star

I think you didn't read carefully the story. When Jason SHOOTS his load on mom's face and mouth, precum and sperm don't run DOWN the head of his cock. He shoots, so no infection!

Obviously English isn't your first language and if it isn't then I can make exception to your grammatical mistakes.

'I'm glad to hear you understand, Kelly. Also, it pleases me that you chose to involve herself' - should be yourself.

You went from past tense to first tense in places which made it difficult to read.

You used were not was.

Still it was a good attempt at a well trodden story.

Having a third person take responsibility for their actions is a good idea, but this lacked excitement. Naming the doctor 'Wood' was juvenile.

This story is stupid from the start.

And it got boring after that.

Please don't write anymore.

Re-do this story and limit Dr. Wood to the first page of the first chapter with 1 visit only! She overwhelms the chapter that I stopped reading once I to the bottom of the 2nd page.

... it's a bit silly; I get several laughs in each chapter. However, it is fiction, and it is very hot.

Thanks for writing.

I know it's just a typo, but it's making me laugh so hard

I agree with most every other comment I read to a some degree. However, once I was able to put aside the numerous errors etc. I thought the premise of the story was smoking hot!

Even if the plot of mom doctor son, is a little repeatative, it never gets old, 10/10, if you want something similar, check out measuring cum.

the imagery is hot indeed............how 'big' (girth) is Jason?

You started writing in past tense then:

"Kelly nodded and sighs, "So what do we have to do for Jason to help him?"

Dr. Wood pretends to think for a moment, she was pleased with her question, "

Why change to present tense then back again.

You would think the doctor would use the correct words instead of the usual sex story that the cum comes from the testicals instead of the prostate.

Bill S.

Although there several stories of this type on this site, ths is the first one I have read where the mother honestly cares for her son and realizes, on her own, that he is a young man and not a child. Although she is embarrassed by her sexual feelings for her son, she tryies to come to terms with her emotions without ill feelings toward her son. I am anxious to find out how submissive the mother is.

sorry, could read past 1/2 of the first page. Ridiculous.