by jlenil
Jlenil, you asked for comments and votes on this chapter. I'm afraid you don't want my vote. The best comment I can make is that you do an excellent job presenting content I don't like. Alexis is such a bitch, I dislike her immensely.
So kinky and depraved! Not big on the ash mouth but hot all around. Can't wait to see where this leads!
I loved it and look forward to more chapters, seriously though I don't know why some people read stories on this site - if it's not to your taste .......then don't read it, fairly simple!
I was very excited to see another chapter of this story!
I not only love the story so far, I'm planning on having my girlfriend read it to get some ideas of what to do with me.
Keep up the good work!
is thrown in now. Honestly could you fit anymore fetishes in this saga? Maybe move onto scat soon or perhaps castrate and nullify him?