by loerics
I rarely read in this category, but decided to try this story. It figures the only comment is from one of the "anony's" and is of course negative. I can't say the story is my cup of tea, but it does move along and has a strong story line.
You’re obviously an idiot who just trolls stories after you jack off to them.
This is a great story! Keep it coming!
I'm enjoying this series and feel the writing is some of the best in this forum. I hope to see more chapters added. Thanks for taking the time to create and share with us.
I prefer to write stories that slowly build to an intense sex scene. It seems you prefer short stroke stories. There are numerous excellent works on Literotica in that meet your criteria. If you want, I can make some suggestions. I've tried writing imitation pieces, but they always end up longer. Sorry.