All Comments on 'Jeannie's Secret Desires Ch. 01'

A well-told story spoiled by sloppy spelling. Please learn the difference between 'to' and 'too'.

And it's fanfare.

enjoyed the story, but do agree about spellcheck.

btw, 'you've got mail'

don

I read this and went straight on to Chap two ... i very much enjoyed the level of detail and passion you shared ... i could almost feel like i was there ... thank you for writing and sharing ... i hope there will be a chapter 3 :)