All Comments on 'Jeannie's Shopping "Strip"'

by MrFrustration

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zooliciouszooliciousabout 5 years ago
Holy Hotness

Yes Yes Yes

What a story. What fun. Inspiring nudity at its best.

LIVINRFANTASIESLIVINRFANTASIESabout 7 years ago
"Strip" Malls and Shopping Centers

We loved this story. Lots of memories except my wife never was actually completely nude. She often wore a tube top or extremely low blouse that she could pull down along with hot pants or a mini skirt without panties. A safer way to play a similar game.

Love the way Jeannie got even and completed several fantasies all in one afternoon.

Yes, there are other malls and these games are habit forming.

storm_usmcstorm_usmcalmost 8 years ago
Great story

Nice transition from exhibitionism to three-way. You should continue this, I love the showing off and teasing and the friendly sex is freaking hot. I think some playful bondage with next three-way would be cool or some other friends and skinny dipping. Great job!!

sparkle8sparkle8about 8 years ago
Funny

I love the humor. It adds immensely to the erotic content.

storm_usmcstorm_usmcabout 8 years ago
Great story

The emotions run a little fast but it was a good read. Nice buildup up but play out the actual scenes better. Very hot

eternalcuriosityeternalcuriosityabout 8 years ago
Hot like an L.A. summer threesome!

This is a superbly naughty story; very well written with all the right sexual tension and buildup to an explosive finale! Will there be more? Please?

spankedhusbandspankedhusbandabout 8 years ago
Thnks For A Marvelous Story

Exceptionally well written. Thank you for making the effort to share such a nearly flawless script. Exhibitionism isn't my favorite genre, but your superlative writing and story telling skills conspired to keep me riveted until the end. Bravo!!

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