by Tx Tall Tales
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I stumbled across this story, the first time, just on a whim, so to speak--Since then, I've spent the past two days trying to find it, and *finally*, got it again! Very, very well-written. Very hot. The intensity builds, drops, builds, again...like a very nice roller-coaster ride.
Keep up the excellent writing!
Absolutely preposterous premise, and yet, completely awesome :D Great writing. Preferred the first two in the series, but I love the background and detail you put in to try and make the ridiculously impossible only seem highly unlikely :) Keep up the good work.
YOUR DISCREPTION OF THE ANAL PLAY WAS SO CORRECT THAT YOU MUST HAVE HAD ONE IN YOURSELF. I LOVE IT SO MUCH WHEN MY GIRLFRIEND USES A STRAP ON IN ME I COME IN BUCKETS.
The SIL is a personal trainer, yet she needs the BIL to teach her exercises and muscle groups?
Still a hot story, but that went beyond a suspension of disbelief.
This story is missing something, someone to like. Neither the guy or his sister in law have a conscience and the wife must be as dumb as a post. I think I know why there are so few comments. This is like Loving Wives with no consequences.
You said that the story should be believable. Do you actually think your readers can believe that one sister will tell her sister it is one to fuck her husband! Incredible!!