All Comments on 'Jen and Mike Ch. 16'

Everything's changed.....Jenny's lying to Mike makes their relationship a farce. Please, even though it will hurt, let Mike learn the truth about his "Goddess" and his daughter. It is time for Mike to leave! Of course only Mike will be hurt since neither of the others love him anymore, but at least he'll be gone.

Mike need to find out before he goes to see jasmine so he can fuck Jasmine and see how jen feel about that

Sorry but I really am going to stop reading this story. I know Xleglover allowed you to do this, but I cannot abide what you are doing to the central characters, Jen & Mike who have followed across many XLeglover's great stories. That Jen would NEVER fall out of love with Mike like you have here. Sorry. If you had written it with other characters, the story would be great as your writing is in itself excellent. I just can't handle it! Ken

YOU HAVE EVEN ALIENATED THE DEVOTED CUCKOLD READERS YOU STUPID BLOODY NONCE!!!

Fantastic chapter and amazing story!!!

Congratulations!

Please bring some actual love back between jenny and mike. Her faking is taking away from an awesome storyline. You have a great talent for writing. Otherwise, this is the best story I have read in a while.

Can we have some more cuckolding by Jesse and Jen pls? So Mike can get something out of it too. How abt Mike becoming a full time sub?

Hope the next chapter will be out soon.

I'm totally with another comment. To have Jen fall out of love with Mike defeats the whole charm of the series. Please change this or lose many readers, including me!

This is also in danger of the fetish, the perversion, the addiction taking over from the humanity of the characters. When that happens it just becomes a diatribe of lust with no real feelings, which is boring in the extreme. 1*

Congratulations. Very much in keeping with the original. I still despise Mike but feel sorry for him as he obviously suffers from a severe mental illness that has remained untreated for over20 years. As much as I despise him, I loathe Jenny, and now Jessie, as a self centered, selfish, narcissistic uncaring bitch. Will Mike ever escape? Probably not, but I’ll keep reading