All Comments on 'Jeni's Arrangement Ch. 02'

Compliments for You on a good Subject, Well-handled. and to whoever edits your stuff on a job well done. (if it was you, then so much the better) the story flowed very well,

So much so that at the end, I realised there were points I had missed, so had to go back and re-read, much more slowly. To my mind, that's the mark of a well-writ tale, that you Do realise you've done it too fast and need to do it again. and no similarities need be drawn to any other activity, either

Cheers and again, Well Done.

Kilroy