by Noghri
I loved it and my cock loved it even more. You described the fucking and sucking perfectly. Jim is such a lucky guy to have the thrill of using his cock on both his cousin and his sister. That's what cocks are for: fucking the ladies and having the ladies suck them. Excellent family incest. Keep writing this beautiful kind of inces story. Thank you for the pleasure.
A story that is "driven" by raging hormones is so very much hotter, than one driven by four-letter explitives. There's a fine line between the two, and you walked it beautifully.
Strong writing, combined with great flow, pacing, and well-written sex makes for one hell of a story. Bravo, madame. <br><br>After reading and enjoying this piece, I'm going to check out your other works. Well done indeed, and I wish you the best of luck with your future works.<br><br>I noticed several points during the story where a few things were misspelled or the grammar/tense changed a bit awkwardly. If you ever need a proof reader, let me know and I'll be glad to take a look.
The only things that could have made it better are an editor with a spell-check and good grammar, but even with the errors, that was awesome!
This is a very hot story. Keep it going and bring in Jenna's mother for a hot incest summer.
the narration was beautiful. the content was really well thought out. loved it. thank you