All Comments on 'Jennifer in Chastity'

Decent read. Only criticism is the overuse of capitalized words. It should only be done to emphasize something maybe once in a paragraph. A couple times in each sentence is extreme and unnecessary for the flow of story.

I personally quite enjoyed this story. I like the "slave" theme and how powerless Jennifer really is. However, I feel like you desperately need to proof read this story, or seek out an editor. There are a lot of errors that were confusing.

I do wish the sexual scenes were explored in more detail, those parts seem a little glossed over.

Other than that, I liked the pacing and length of this. I would definitely like to read more!

a great story well written as far as I could with only an average of one mistake a page (heck of a lot better than a number of other stories I enjoy) and they are such small mistakes too

She made a trip to the hardware store, cut the belt off and transferred to another school, never seeing the pervert again. The end to a pile of crap story.

I can see it is difficult for a man to write a story about female chastity, but this is not bad. Jennifers character development need a little work, but the central theme works.

Can you say violence and abuse? Can you say stupid?

Can you say, it's just a story? Can you say, it's not real? Can you?

Awesome story line!

He will blackball her to other sugar daddies well that’s ok she will be blackball him in a completely different an then let the police handle him an standing in court saying he coerced her which he did with his threats that if she didn’t submit he would ruin her life so all the sex is also rape I was waiting for her to get a backbone an was disappointed