by ArtyGee
Oh, it is great to see Chap 6 so soon. How long can you keep this up?
It's called catatonic, not comatose. The main character doesn't act in a manner that I could conceive of a real person acting. It's like she's a caricature.
I like it. I wasn't sure at first, but the slow transformation is fun. Being fictional, I can go along with some of the stuff that probably wouldn't happen in real life. That's why it's fiction!
The shields around the nipples? I've seen those in the past and don't consider them very sexy, but I did like the piercing scene. Now she needs to have a clit ring installed!
Looking forward to the next installment.
The next instalment is intended to be the last. We are struggling a bit with how to end it so that it is HOT. Please be patient, it will be worth it.
Arty
It's only a story. Elastic bands tightly around the nipples for that long would result in necrosis if lucky, gangrene if not.
I’m still wondering where this is headed- surely not just for a porn shoot? Who is really behind it? I have an idea or two, but we will see. Nicely written, although I would have likes a few more details... the piercings are usually fitted oversize to allow for swelling and permanent jewellery fitted later???