by soppingwetpanties
You do write some intensely hot, knickers-dampening stories, SWP. I think I need to go for a quiet moment after reading this one ...
Really, really, really hot. All of the setup and backstory, and the deliberate pacing, work together to heighten the impact of the sex and BDSM scenes. The style you've been developing is maturing into a very individualistic approach. This is one of your best efforts yet.
So far from your stories I've read, that's the best one yet
Well written and incredibly erotic. Nice to get some of the back story.
This is another amazing example of the type of erotica I hope to find here. A beautifully written story containing passion, beauty and lust. A favorite!
I will have to find and read all your other stories. I sure hope there are more. But first I need to take a shot break and bring myself off.
Mistress SWP, Another fine, hot story! Your work is some of the finest I've ever read on Literotica, please keep it coming!
Really enjoying how this story series is coming together ... Thank you Mistress
Agreed a very fine chapter. Jennifer is in a Vortex now.
I take exception to the condition Jennifer thought of Laneys cunt, fresh is always best "(!)"