All Comments on 'Jennifer's Sexual Awakening Ch. 01'

It woke me up! Now I want more!!

Lukas

Enjoyed the Story. Got anymore of this 1 in you pen or Puter?

You need a proof reader! Errors in puncuation and having her roll a cigerette, that suddenly becomes a joint in the first 4 paragraphs is a bit too much.

What "errors in puncuation" - my version (the original) has thoughts written in italics which didn't show up, speech in single inverted commas (') and quotes differentiated by double inverted commas (").

"having her roll a cigerette, that suddenly becomes a joint in the first 4 paragraphs is a bit too much" - the pot box contained a cigarette lighter, do you think I should call it a "joint lighter" instead because you can't go into a shop and get one of those?