All Comments on 'Jenn's First Time'

by Military Mech

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
a suggestion

In the future skip all the use of "..." as it distracts from and adds confusion to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Yawn

Major Yawn oh did I forget to mention YAWN

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
46DD?

Get a clue pal. 46DD makes her a real fatty.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
ignore the haters

excellent writing

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