by ITPro
you wrote another great chapter in the series. Question I have is how do you explain to the doctor that Josh is the father of Sara's baby when he is her father? It was nice to see that she had a good experience with the man for the first time in her life.I can hardly wait for the next chapter and how Amanda is taken by Josh
This story just keeps getting better and better. I like the way you go to great lengths to explain the dynamics of the relationships. Keep writing.
......sick twist in this plot that just wasn't needed. Lot's of other options, hell a turkey baster would have been better. It's just not a line that's that easy to cross. And for your information, most NORMAL Dad's don't look at their Daughter's that way. Geez. Completely ruined a good series. jahoo
5 stars! its very sexy and erotic, but its also well-written and very loving. i wish you would write more. thanks
Soooo, what happened to Amanda and the kids? Only gave you 4 for just forgetting your minor characters.