All Comments on 'Jenny Ch. 02'

If readers don't back up to chapter one first, this will leave you scratching your head not your nuts. The kink here is still creepy as all hell but readers need to go with the 'your kink is not my kink, but whatever' mindset. The relationship between husband and wife is what makes this story. (Yes, imma chick, tough shit, I like relationship stuff.) The intrusion of real life into the active fantasy was great. It was like watching LARPers yell 'hold!' when someone interrupts the foam sword fight. Creepy and yet enjoyable.