All Comments on 'Jenny Goes to Dinner'

Extremely well written, and highly erotic, notwithstanding the punctuation and spelling errors. Keep these stories cumming

Now this was a HOT story! How I would love to take Jenny's place for an evening - or two. Beautifully written and extremely erotic - thank you, RedDragon43 - five stars!

That was one of the best stories that I have ever read. Beautifully written and classy. Please write more. Thank you.

The pace and tone of this story were such a tease! I loved it. What could have been done quickly was done so slowly and carefully that the tension built perfectly.

Unfortunately the spelling and grammar errors detracted from the overall effect. Perhaps in the future an editor would be helpful.

This was a wonderfully written piece but could have been so much better with the help of a little editing. All of the grammatical errors were distracting. Keep writing just have someone help you with the boring stuff! lol

i absolutely loved the story! i cant wait for another chapter. as others have said would be great to recheck spelling and grammar. otherwise it was wonderful. keep up the good work.

Guys the story is amazing, you can look past the grammatical errors. Will be waiting for the next chapter, you are an amazing writer.