All Comments on 'Jenny Seals the Deal Pt. 02'

This was alright, that is about all I can say for this ch

The first chapter you used first person in Jenny's eyes. This one went to third person. Was a little jarring reading the two chapters back-to-back.

This made me squirt the longest time in my life! God I have never comed harder!

this was short, it could use more, but ever so sensual. this one got me off. very well written, you do have writing talent, do not quit.