All Comments on 'Jenny Seals the Deal'

by GenGdreams

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Yes please

don't stop!

jsmangisjsmangisalmost 7 years ago
More Please!

An excellent first chapter. I hope there are more to cum!

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Mealmost 7 years ago
Damn, that was too short...

...but I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Sounds like it will be mmm mmm good.

QueenlynnQueenlynnalmost 7 years ago

Can't wait for a second part!!!! 5 stars!!!!!

tentaclesforalltentaclesforallalmost 7 years ago
The meat is in the buildup

First of all, great little story.

Making it all about the seduction rather than the conclusion was both daring and very effective; it worked and don't let anybody tell you otherwise.

This might be your first story here, but I kinda doubt this is the first story you've ever written... Too good for that.

You know what you are doing and I'll be keeping an eye on this account...

blondsublesblondsublesalmost 7 years ago
Very well done

We aren't all bad in the south! ;) Very nice pacing. Hoping for a part 2

Bree

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

5 glasses of wine before the meal even arrives isn't "tipsy", especially for a woman of 125 lbs. and an empty stomach.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 7 years ago
Very nice story!

Please continue it! Thanks for sharing it with us!

JezalaneJezalanealmost 7 years ago
A great appetizer.

Now to the main course please. This is a great beginning and you've made me hungry for more.

scopecom23scopecom23almost 7 years ago
Keep up the good work!

Nice setup and good characters - Looking forward to reading more.

GenGdreamsGenGdreamsover 3 years agoAuthor
The sweetest words!

Thank you all for these words. A few things had me tied up over the last three years. Forgive my absence and failure to respond. Be well, beautiful people!

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