by GenGdreams
...but I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Sounds like it will be mmm mmm good.
First of all, great little story.
Making it all about the seduction rather than the conclusion was both daring and very effective; it worked and don't let anybody tell you otherwise.
This might be your first story here, but I kinda doubt this is the first story you've ever written... Too good for that.
You know what you are doing and I'll be keeping an eye on this account...
We aren't all bad in the south! ;) Very nice pacing. Hoping for a part 2
Bree
5 glasses of wine before the meal even arrives isn't "tipsy", especially for a woman of 125 lbs. and an empty stomach.
Now to the main course please. This is a great beginning and you've made me hungry for more.
Nice setup and good characters - Looking forward to reading more.
Thank you all for these words. A few things had me tied up over the last three years. Forgive my absence and failure to respond. Be well, beautiful people!