All Comments on 'Jenny The Intern Takes Control'

more.... please....

I like this...not sure exactly where it is going...but you have piqued my interest...I want more also...please continue

remainder to come, already submitted. seems to take about 2 weeks to get approved.

This is a great opening to a story that would seem to be one that could be one of the best. Don't hurry, take the time to develop it as it requires.

Too bad the whole thing didn't get posted the first time, because this is a great story so far. Can't wait to read the rest. Reminded me of a similar experience I had with a younger, petite, sexy girl who was newly hired in my office, who would also ask me to do little "favors" for her. She seemed surprised at how willingly I complied, but she really shouldn't have been. Pussy power controls and always has -- which is just as it should be, I might add.

reminds me of a young intern who had me tied around her exquisite finger every day she was at our office and how hard it was to think of anything else but her incredible mesmerizing power over my thoughts

Your description of her attitude and his 'caving in' are fantastic.

This one has only three chapters I wish you could continue it for more chapters or do something in a similar vane with new characters.

And your description of her certainly make me and others excited. :-)

Looking forward to reading the rest!!!

Where the hell is this man's leadership? She has him "fetching" things for her. Even her shoe. LOL, this boy is in big trouble with the things she will squeeze out of him. LOL

Interesting premise.

But barely a beginning. The stage isn't fully set yet.

Three stars.