All Comments on 'Jenny's Innocence Ch. 01'

no point in reading it.

why don't writer's just complete a story?

I always look to see how long a story is.

so i know nothing much is going to happen .

2.

... please keep going!

Oh please..please continue

We need another chapter and soon

As when I was young I too felt the love of my dad. The first time is always special.

Dad trained me as Mom watched and I exploded with him.

I think you've opened a real can of worms here. You're obliged to continue this wonderful tale. It stopped just as it was getting Hot'n'Sassy!

After Daddy starts making love to Jenny will she ever want to go back to Max?

Will Daddy teach her everything she wants and needs?

Stopping a story in the middle of the act does not leave the reader wanting more! It annoys people. It's frustrating. It lowers your score.

The style works pretty well, it's competently written, especially as your first story. I liked the sex scene.

The problem is the justification - he was going to teach her sex ed by fucking her? That doesn't make sense. I'd much prefer if you left out that flimsy explanation and admit to what is really happening - a man grooming his daughter over the years into having sex with him.

They can still do it, and enjoy it, but let's not pretend this is something it's not.

Phenomenal story

hot, hot , hot....wish it was me