All Comments on 'Jenny's Journey Ch. 02'

Enjoyed your story. Well written.

Chapter 2 and he's an even bigger asshole. Not explaining jacksquat. Looks at her derisively. Smirks at her. Slaps her face-even if lightly- instead of just fricking telling her what he expects. Insults her. Hump his shoe? No. Hell no.

A couple points for him showing that bit of care after, but by then I don't like him so it's too late. Points off that you gave her only the most fleeting thought about any limit. Use your brain, woman! Ask a question! Make an objection! Good there's a safe word, but it stops all. Where's the 'just a minute' or 'I've got a question' word?

He's tossed her off a cliff without an belay line. It is his RESPONSIBILITY to protect her; from himself and even from herself. His domination is scornful and demeaning in style. A positive and building style is more powerful and erotic.