All Comments on 'Jen's Birthday Pt. 01'

my wife started to read you story after ravaging me we both finish the story together one of the best

Great story - well written.

Was a little surprised there was maid service and an outhouse at the same place, but it was different.

Very hot, but it would have been easier to follow if one couple's names had started with a different letter - say Sam and Sally.

but would have been even hotter if more attention had been paid to feelings. The actions were scalding hot but we don't really get any idea how all that action affected the characters.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

Couldn’t make it thru in one reading—too hot. I couldn’t keep them straight either. Don’t jack and Jill belong together? Let’s explore their sex together more and find out... sounds like big boobs and huge cock will be there too!

Very sexy writing but I found the names confusing and detracted from the story. What was the necessity of having only j names? Also why did the men only last 2-minutes every time they had sex. Unrealistic and one-dimensional. More exploration of feelings would have made the story 5-stars

....bit confusing with all the names beginning with “J”.

I had to leave the room and go tug one off in the middle. I would love to find myself in a similar situation someday.

My only complaint is that I really do not like the word “cunt”! I only use that word to disparage a woman that I abhore