All Comments on 'Jen's Birthday Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good but..

You could have chosen more easy to follow names. All those simple J names made it difficult to follow who is married to who

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
And the other couple...

Please can we have a part 3?

Don’t leave us all hanging?

Wonderful stuff!

NikkiejanesNikkiejanesabout 6 years ago
Great story

Felt like I wanted to join in with the girld.

Agree with earlier comment about names but hard to think of them at times

loveloverloveloveralmost 6 years ago
Ok

Lower energy than first, but nice. Recall jack and Jill are not a couple, and you can keep them separate. Not a hint of jealousy.....

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