All Comments on 'Jerry and Londy, A Lifelong Bond'

by WyreBendr0417

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Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 3 years ago

More please this really good. I am enjoying the build up to involving mom but eager to see what happens with sis & bro.

sp9983sp9983almost 3 years ago

Definitely another chapter. Also the brother should take her last virginity.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Another chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Another chapter please!!

DrStingDrStingalmost 3 years ago

More, more, more!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

More, More. It is great!!!!

smltwnguysmltwnguyalmost 3 years ago

Great set-up for another installment. Eagerly waiting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
dumped on the pain crap 1 star

Inflicting pain should NEVER happen. wanted or not

Romeo0881Romeo0881almost 3 years ago

Please sir. Can we have some more…

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

MOAR!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Another chapter, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Absolutely another chapter. This was well thought out and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

More please

kingswedekingswedealmost 3 years ago
More

You got a great story line going here that could stretch for two or more chapters.

Enjoy writing and we will enjoy reading

SemperSolus0198SemperSolus0198almost 3 years ago

WELL!! Don't tease us damn-it! Where's the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

OMG, Don't stop now!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You stop now and we'll get you banned from Literotica! Well done!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 2 years ago

Pretty decent overall but the relationship escalation seemed a bit too rushed for me. Same with the mother, I would have loved a little more flirting/touching to build up to the encounter. 4*

laughdruidlaughdruidover 2 years ago

More chapters please, what a tease, what a place to stop.

Diann_MomDiann_Mom8 months ago

Very good story and I loved it. I see that part 2 is quite long so I bookmarked it for the future read.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Stop wasting your time

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I've always enjoyed reading erotic stories, thought I'd try my hand at writing some.