by WyreBendr0417
More please this really good. I am enjoying the build up to involving mom but eager to see what happens with sis & bro.
Definitely another chapter. Also the brother should take her last virginity.
Inflicting pain should NEVER happen. wanted or not
You got a great story line going here that could stretch for two or more chapters.
Enjoy writing and we will enjoy reading
Pretty decent overall but the relationship escalation seemed a bit too rushed for me. Same with the mother, I would have loved a little more flirting/touching to build up to the encounter. 4*
Very good story and I loved it. I see that part 2 is quite long so I bookmarked it for the future read.